Arvinder Kaur – Amavas


his silhouette
beyond the last street lamp –
Amavas

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  1. dalvirgill
    ਅਗ. 27, 2014 @ 17:34:19

    Arvinder Kaur‎ >> HAIKU OMNI
    November 13, 2012 ·

    his silhouette
    beyond the last street lamp-
    Amavas

    Kuljeet Mann, Rosie Mann, Melanie Swinden and 6 others like this.
    Dalvir Gill :
    Amaavas ……………………….
    November 13, 2012 at 6:12am · Like · 1

    Arvinder Kaur :
    as in ? i used this word deliberately …you think it should be elaborated r explained ?
    November 13, 2012 at 6:14am · Like · 1

    Dalvir Gill :
    No, it says it all. the silhouette is formed when the backdrop is lighted or the ‘light’ is at the back. if he’s on the other side of the light then he is visible not his silhouette. it’s ‘false’ as for as the reporting goes, but reportage and ‘story-telling’ is what irritates me in a haiku. the way you wrote is what endears the image which is not ‘real’ but is ‘True’ – a haiku. And as far the juxtaposition goes, Amavas is the night with no Moon ( beloved ), and the beloved is not present but the memory ( Silhouette ) – to me, a perfect juxtaposition. if Haiku is not poetry but is poetical, then this is an exemplary haiku. Am i making any sense?
    November 13, 2012 at 6:26am · Like · 2

    Arvinder Kaur :
    yes ..you just made it…both sense and my day !
    November 13, 2012 at 6:48am · Unlike · 2

    Dalvir Gill :
    🙂
    November 13, 2012 at 5:23pm · Like

    Melanie Swinden :
    What lovely visions this creates…….
    November 13, 2012 at 6:18pm · Unlike · 2

    Arvinder Kaur :
    hearfelt thanks for all likes and comments !
    November 14, 2012 at 6:23am · Like

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